i really like this i love the ronald mcdonald arm and the rib poking out of her shirt. but i don't think she's that zombie like she looks like she murdered someone yes but not like she got herself out of a grave. i think it needs more skin effects and wounds on her and make her a little dirtier also her expression kind've gives me more of a seductive percepsion i think she should look a bit more mindless like not looking at the camera and such. the rib jutting out also blends a little too much into the shirt the white makes the blood more noticeable but the wound is to plain i think it should pop out more and there should be more wounds like the one on her neck. don't get me wrong i absolutly love this and honestly couldn't do better if i tried yet looking at your other deviations i know this can help you to better your art and i hope it does ^^
As you probably already know from your Daily Devation (congrats on that, by the way!), this is a piece with great impact. I'm not even sure why I love this so much, but I do. It actually took me a bit looking over it to notice that the arm belonged to Ronald McDonald, and after that, I loved it more!
I think the message in this piece and be seen differently by everyone, and I'm having trouble pinning down just one, which I for one think is a good thing.
The photo is well shot and very professional looking. As a cosplayer though, I just want to point out that her shirt looks a little white for a zombie. Maybe dirty it up first before applying the blood to it? And maybe the hair is a little too neat, but I'm not going to be too harsh on you because the overall make up job is really good and the Ronald McDonald arm looks amazing.
Anyway, I love it and hope to see more like this in the future.
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I think the message in this piece and be seen differently by everyone, and I'm having trouble pinning down just one, which I for one think is a good thing.
The photo is well shot and very professional looking. As a cosplayer though, I just want to point out that her shirt looks a little white for a zombie. Maybe dirty it up first before applying the blood to it? And maybe the hair is a little too neat, but I'm not going to be too harsh on you because the overall make up job is really good and the Ronald McDonald arm looks amazing.
Anyway, I love it and hope to see more like this in the future.
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